Corpus Crispin

I submitted a new story. I'm not sure where it will end up (It's not super authoritarian... yet), but if you come across Corpus Crispin, give it a try and let me know what you think. I like it. It didn't feel forced to write. That's the worst when you put out two pages of writing and then read back over it and think, this is totally spinning my wheels, not good. 

I've started tons of stories, written five pages and then completely lost interest. If I'm bored, the readers will definitely be bored and what's the point of finishing it out. 

It's a picture perfect day and the bf is coming home soon so we can go run White Rock Lake. It's a pretty pricey area, but the bf wants to buy a house in the area. It's gentrifying quickly but we want to be closer in to the city. Ok well anyways, Hope everyone has the day off to do something awesome.