I like this chapter. I think the next chapter is going to give them a break from relationship struggles and let them just be happy while outside influences start to meddle and they overcome it together. That or I'll totally flip the story.
One of my favorite authors does that with his stories in really awesome ways. You can find his current series that I love by clicking here ---> Steve Buys a Slave.
Next I'm going to work on another chapter of Ben Touches Down and hopefully get it moved to the authoritarian section as that's where the story is heading. I like writing a younger, dom character. It'll be interesting to see what Ben does to use and abuse his willing older patron. I picture him (he still has no name) as an older, fit guy who is connected to a larger group of guys who like to be dominated. I've had some neat ideas on where he and Ben can go from here. So we'll see what writes out.
Bah! Not sure what happened with the latest chapter. It was ok when I sent it in but it seems like all the spacing between paragraphs is effed. Maybe my settings in MS Word? Any suggestions? It looks awful.
ReplyDeleteGreat job man!loved it ;)
ReplyDeleteBtw,what about crispins story? That one was really great too
Thank you! I hope to get inspiration with how to finish Crispin's story. It deserves a good chapter to finish it up. It wasn't meant to be a long series. I don't know how I could keep it going past three or four chapters. But I will hopefully get inspiration for it soon. Thanks! :)
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